Basically, I'll have three frames. The Recession monster is going to dominate the guy with a puny undergrad shield, and even make the graduate guy scared. It's addressing the question of how much school it takes to give an individual security nowadays. The old man is saying "it takes a bigger shield, gentlemen." The final illustration will be much less rough, and the dialogue will probably be a little more clever.
I think your detail on the wise old man is very good. The monster looks more like a blob. You may want to clean him up a bit. But, this is a great start. I would also say that instead of "gentleman" you may want to use a gender-neutral "folks."
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